Gideon Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Aberrant: Outbreak call for assistanceI have composed an Aberrant Adventure. Since I did this on my own I had to write, organize, illustrate and edit it. As such I am hoping for a little help in polishing it for mass consumption.Its vital statistics: Title: Aberrant: Outbreak Page Count: 66 Word Count: 35,714 Image Count: 22 (one is in there twice) Format: PDF Size: 7,412KbThe questions I need answered are: 1 - Does it entertain? 2 - Does it expand the setting? 3 - Does it challenge the Players? 4 - Is it detailed enough? 5 - Does the included art, hurt or help to matterial? 6 - Is the layout user-friendly?I am looking for 3 folks who can: A - Read the 66 page manuscript within the next two weeks. B - Provide spelling, grammar and connon corrections. C - Provide layout feedback. D - Can withold preview info, until the final edit is finished.The first three folks to reply to this will be considered, and will be sent the semi-final draft.This adventure is actually a remix of one of many adventure I ran my group through, I am trying to see if this is an appropriate way to share, or if it would be better if I just publish all of the adventure (40+) as short story seeds in one document.Responses and feed back on the format concept would be appreciated.Best Regards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyLion Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Sure, Id love to help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finbar Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Feed me, Seymour!FR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madcat82 Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Sure thing. Im on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gideon Posted May 16, 2006 Author Share Posted May 16, 2006 First off thanks! I appreciate you volunteering to be my "editors"/guinea pigs...some say my prose are an unconstitutional form of punishment. ::biggrin jkI will use the forum email capacity to send you my private email address so each of you can send me where you want me to drop a ~7Mb PDf file.Again thank you for your help.Jack "Gideon" Summanen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Thunder Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Darn, I replied too late! Oh well, I look forward to the finished product. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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