Ashnod Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 Up from the depths, thirty stories high, breathing fire, he stands in the sky, Godzilla! Godzilla! Godzilla!And ENDEA--------VOR.....That's right, straight from the island nation of Japan, hot on the heels of our last participant, this month's featured nova is the Lovely Nova Senshi Hino "Endeavor" Sakurako. Let's have a blast and see what's cooking!E-chan stories are due April 18th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 *feels a shiver down spine*I have a BAAAD feeling about this. ~.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vox Via Posted March 23, 2005 Share Posted March 23, 2005 That's funny I have good feeling abou this month.Go super happy sunshine mega Neo-sailor miss Sakurako Endeavor uper-classwoman Strike team nija Hino! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 Well, we're at the 10 day warning, fellas. Only 1 entry so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarot Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 Still trying to figure out whether 'ball gag' is spelled as two words or if I should hyphenate it. Since it shows up in thirty-seven places in my story I want to be right about how its spelled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kestrel404 Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 I just came up with something. Now I just need time to get it on paper... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 *lols a plenty*I just seen Doc Troll's work. Overboard? Perhaps. True... possibly. Funny? *bleep*yeah!Keep it coming guys! My inbox is a bunch of tumbleweed here still! ~.^*Seriously considers a cheerleader costume and pom-poms...* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted April 8, 2005 Share Posted April 8, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 5 more days! I know from chat there's a couple more coming at least, so let's see if this month will have as many entries as previous months!Shouldn't be hard to come up with something, gang. Endeavor has been around for 4 years on these forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarot Posted April 13, 2005 Share Posted April 13, 2005 Hmm... maybe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kestrel404 Posted April 14, 2005 Share Posted April 14, 2005 Well, that took forever. Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted April 14, 2005 Share Posted April 14, 2005 Very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 14, 2005 Share Posted April 14, 2005 Oh.... my.... GOD!That was brilliant, Alchemist! You guys are making my job TOUGHER. >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Posted April 15, 2005 Share Posted April 15, 2005 Alchemist... damn.... I'm too ashamed of mine to post it now that was awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted April 15, 2005 Share Posted April 15, 2005 That's why I try not to read the others before I write my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magus Posted April 15, 2005 Share Posted April 15, 2005 Between Prodigy and Alchemist there seems to be a much higher bar involved now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Posted April 15, 2005 Share Posted April 15, 2005 it's been so long since I penned a Haiku... my apologies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 15, 2005 Share Posted April 15, 2005 Keep it coming! Competition breeds innovation! So says Sakurako. *pulls out pom-poms and cheers the gang on*Good work by all, again. Sorta sucks I gotta pick one.I do reccomend to Ashnod that Saimhe is the next character up. I already got a nice story dreamed up in myhead that'd take me only a few hours or so to write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashnod Posted April 15, 2005 Author Share Posted April 15, 2005 The order, while a SEEEEEEEECRET, is already made. ^_~ Can't recommend what is already pre-chosen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 Well, It's the 18th.... I will be posting the winner and reviews tonight! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 Okay, first, I will review each piece.Amped: You got yours in under the wire. It's pretty well weaved together, but it seems to take Endeavor out of the spotlight a bit. These contests are about the character "in the hotseat" more than anything else.Ashnod: Definately above the bar work. thing is, you actually got into Endeavor's head VERY well indeed. Even I have thought about a story just like this. I'll accept this piece as Canon, if you're wondering. Indeed Sakurako needs to get out more.Jager: This will be part of Canon, but unfortuantely, it would have been better served in a fiction outside the contest. Amped's 45/55 involvement of Bandwidth was forgivable, but this story was more a Jager story.Long: Very cute Haiku, small, but weighs a ton! Good work.Alchemist: Futures... whenever we act, we create a divergent tangent of timeline that would be the opposite choice, or an alternatlve considered. This story illustrated the... inefficiency of scrying the timeline to look into the future. It's a very good piece of science fiction work, and if you're wondering, I'll also take it as canon. Something she did probably before the dive, but never really let on about, or wants to admit.Prodigy: This is a very well written story, but damn violent. Also I don't think it would have been in her right interests to not follow her "guest's" directions. But again, it was good, and darn brutal.Doc Troll: I found your story very amusing to say the least, almost cartoonish. Then again, at times Sakurako's behavior is somewhat cartoonish. I would even say this is Canon as well, just beacuse it fits her. But the time on ths would be after she joined up with the Windy City Knights sometime next month or so.Saimhe: First, I must say this is straight Canon. Probably before you and the gang stop by to visit. It was a very descriptive story, not really involving Sakurako's powers, but Sakurako in a different light. Vulnerible, lost, preparing to move on.Anyone else.... *looks around with binoculars...* Nope... so I suppose it's time to decide who's cuisine reigns supreme... no... wrong show...This was a good collection of stories, don't get me wrong. But one in particular did shine through.Month Three's Winner is...............*SPIT IT OUT ALREADY* says the crowd...I was split between Ashnod and Alchemist's stories. Alchemist's Sci-Fi yarn was VERY awesome, and Ashnod's story was true to Endeavor in every sense of the word. Both stories are now considered canon as well (as mentioned in the reviews). Ashnod's creativity was VERY heavy. But, Alchemist had a slight edge in that department.So the question is, who got the 3 run score, and who got the GRAND SLAM? Both are good, but one is a tiny bit better.It's my opinion that Alchemist got the Grand Slam. Alchemist, you seem to have alot of experience with science fiction, and you captured the heart of it with every word. While Ashnod captured Sakurako's conundrum with herself, you captured her potential.So, Alchemist is the official winner of this month!!! Congratulations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kestrel404 Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walker Posted April 20, 2005 Share Posted April 20, 2005 Now that the contest is over I shall reveal a wacky thought that came into my head. A long time ago in a parallel universe far, far away... Endeavor battles her evil nemesis Ronin-Man in a fight to the death following Ronin-Man drowning her genetically engineered pink kittens. Ronin-Man has made some adjustments to his Goofiber suit rendering him immune to Endeavor's electro-katana. There's only one thing for it. Quickly she attunes a handy push-bike and performs a hyperspeed slam sending Ronin-Man sailing into the distance... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 20, 2005 Share Posted April 20, 2005 4000m! WH00T I TEH WIN! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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