Robert J. Lambert Posted October 20, 2007 Share Posted October 20, 2007 All complains and questions will be answered here. =DI hope I get more than one feedback post XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z-Aura Posted October 21, 2007 Share Posted October 21, 2007 There were some typos, but as always, your work is good for an non-native English speaker. I like the way that you wrote for Alpha; very macho and feral. I think that there could be some room for more details, but the story is still entertaining.Dawn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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