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Aberrant: 2011 - Feedback on Diamonds in the Dark

Robert J. Lambert

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There were some typos, but as always, your work is good for an non-native English speaker. I like the way that you wrote for Alpha; very macho and feral. I think that there could be some room for more details, but the story is still entertaining.


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