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Aberrant: 2011 - Feedback Request: Surreal


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I don't ask for this in this format often, but Surreal is becoming an important fiction to Caramel. Could I get some feedback on it so far?

I'm particularly concerned about the back-and-forth nature of the second post. Was it too confusing?

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