z-Kara Posted March 27, 2007 Share Posted March 27, 2007 I don't ask for this in this format often, but Surreal is becoming an important fiction to Caramel. Could I get some feedback on it so far?I'm particularly concerned about the back-and-forth nature of the second post. Was it too confusing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ravenshire Posted March 29, 2007 Share Posted March 29, 2007 The second post was not too confusing.For me though, without a character sheet I really can't establish the best frame of reference for how well you portray the character. Why don't you post a character sheet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z-Kara Posted March 29, 2007 Author Share Posted March 29, 2007 I do post a character sheet; to see it, either go to her profile, or on the menu under her name, click on "View Homepage."Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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