Gideon Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Aberrant: Outbreak call for assistanceI have composed an Aberrant Adventure. Since I did this on my own I had to write, organize, illustrate and edit it. As such I am hoping for a little help in polishing it for mass consumption.Its vital statistics: Title: Aberrant: Outbreak Page Count: 66 Word Count: 35,714 Image Count: 22 (one is in there twice) Format: PDF Size: 7,412KbThe questions I need answered are: 1 - Does it entertain? 2 - Does it expand the setting? 3 - Does it challenge the Players? 4 - Is it detailed enough? 5 - Does the included art, hurt or help to matterial? 6 - Is the layout user-friendly?I am looking for 3 folks who can: A - Read the 66 page manuscript within the next two weeks. B - Provide spelling, grammar and connon corrections. C - Provide layout feedback. D - Can withold preview info, until the final edit is finished.The first three folks to reply to this will be considered, and will be sent the semi-final draft.This adventure is actually a remix of one of many adventure I ran my group through, I am trying to see if this is an appropriate way to share, or if it would be better if I just publish all of the adventure (40+) as short story seeds in one document.Responses and feed back on the format concept would be appreciated.Best Regards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soames Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 Color me interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lou Anne Burgess Posted May 17, 2006 Share Posted May 17, 2006 I'd also be interested in taking a look at it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominosys Posted May 26, 2006 Share Posted May 26, 2006 Count me in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Zero Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 Id like to see it as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tekk One Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 I would like to take a look at it to, if it's possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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