needle Posted February 11, 2002 Share Posted February 11, 2002 Ok, this was my first attempt at writing an article. 2.7 come on was it that bad? :pukesmiley I need input here. Did it seem rushed, were the game mechanics off, was the atricle in poor taste? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CHILL Posted February 11, 2002 Share Posted February 11, 2002 2.7?Really - I hadn't seen that?You get a lot of people that rate and don't comment!COME ON PEOPLE - GIVE SOME FEEDBACK FOR NEEDLE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jboerj Posted February 11, 2002 Share Posted February 11, 2002 Heya, Needle, I wouldn't take it personally. It seems tobe only a handful of responses so far.I kind of liked the subject myself but wouldn't rate it as highly as some of the other articles.I think this can be a much better article if you went back and edited it for style, content and clarity.Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
needle Posted February 11, 2002 Author Share Posted February 11, 2002 Ok, its my first article in regards to this site. Most of the time am used to writing for news papers. The Trinity stuff has room for a huge nmber of directions & areas that WW has ignored, I'll be doing another on real soon. Thanks for the feed back. I use this site as part of my on going writing. :animsmiley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FredrikSvanberg Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 It looked more like a draft than an actual article. Bad spelling added to this impression. If the author added some material and corrected the errors it would be much better. It might still be hard to figure out who would find use for the article though, but that can't be fixed just as easily.Nice imagery though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senior Mal Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 I'm afraid I will be playing the scenario invasion at some point so I can't read the article, sorry needle. However don't be discouraged about the article getting 2.7, I always get criticised and look how good I am now! :cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
needle Posted February 12, 2002 Author Share Posted February 12, 2002 3.2 & spelling errors boot ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senior Mal Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 Admin pointed out to me that I had played Alien Invasion, so I've just read the article.I liked it but it needed more meat on the bones. I hate writing stats and things up but if you'd have had a complete write up for each of the seraphim that would have made it much better. Feel free to chastise me for being an arrogant, lecturing bastardo. (I won't take any notice anyway :Devil ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FredrikSvanberg Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 Yes, that was pretty much what I wanted as well. Give me raw data to work with. I'll figure out how to use it and describe it myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CHILL Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 Spelling?So then Jo, I've got to spell check every article as well now eh buddy? :angry :bored ??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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