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Aberrant: 2011 - Sven - The War Unknown


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Sven: I like this fiction so far. The animals talking is a different thing. I do have to ask: is he incinerating spiders for real, or making them play his game by running away and then he "pretends" to destroy them?

The fact that you've got me asking means that you've managed to incorporate reality and fantasy well.

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Thanks!

And actually, I wrote that part while in internal conflict. It was such a cool scene, but I had no idea how it would pull. What I had decided, just in case anyone asked, was all the spiders reactions were real. It literally panicked, flailed, and convulsed. It fell to the ground unmoving.

But in Sven's imagination, it was a smoldering pile of remains. The spider in actuality is fine, but was obeying command.

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