Timeslip Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 This is - so far, at least - a deeply disturbing piece. That said, it is also some of the finest writing I have seen outside of professional publication. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Nova Madigan Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 I touched myself as I read this. Could it be Tomas' influence on me? I don't know.Awesome, awesome stuff. I have only one nitpick: the use of the word "disinterested" when "uninterested" is meant.disinterested: having no stake in the outcome of a decision or contest; (A disinterested third party settled the dispute.)uninterested: having no care for a subject or thing; (Tomas stared out the window uninterestedly.)Sorry, I'm a fool for vocabulary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDP_ST Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 Glad you guys liked it. More to come.Flicker: thanks for the correction. I get carried away sometimes when writing and miss some stuff. I'm going to alter the fic now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomas Saint-Etienne Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Sorry the next installment is taking so long, Skein-fans. I've done a little editing and extra writing in the existing posts for now, but rest assured, Warp and Weft will be updated some time this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomas Saint-Etienne Posted August 6, 2006 Share Posted August 6, 2006 Finally.You wanted it, you got it. The next installment isn't far behind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Nova Madigan Posted August 6, 2006 Share Posted August 6, 2006 Yay yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timeslip Posted September 4, 2006 Author Share Posted September 4, 2006 The more I read of Tomas, the more I see the parallels with Timeslip. A wretched upbringing and twisted emotional development translated into a woefully underdeveloped super-ego and extremely powerful id... and then, the gift of a node to allow all of those dark desires to manifest. Mind you, Timeslip's not quite so bad as is Tomas, but the parallels are there nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomas Saint-Etienne Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 Last part done of Warp and Weft. Now Skein is wandering free again, where will he pop up?"Round and round and round it goes, where it stops, nobody knows..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leliel Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 Both disturbing, and on a primal level quite moving. Shows an understanding of the true nature of pain. Excellent story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted September 14, 2006 Share Posted September 14, 2006 Agreed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Li Ai Jun Yen Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 Loved the story. Dark as hell, but damn, it was well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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