kestrel404 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 In case anyone noticed or cared, I decided on changing the name of my thread in the fiction section. Suits the piece better.The original one was a direct refference to "When Heaven Ends". This one is as well, but more subtle and better suited to what I plan on writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timeslip Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 This is one heck of a piece you are writing; grim, dark, and deeply emotionally evocative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 I'm loving it so far, but I need to read more! ^o^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shen-Kahn Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 one hell of piece, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jager Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 Indeed. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timeslip Posted May 31, 2005 Share Posted May 31, 2005 Damn, Alchemist; this story just keeps getting better. Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Posted May 31, 2005 Share Posted May 31, 2005 yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kestrel404 Posted June 1, 2005 Author Share Posted June 1, 2005 Nearly finished. Almost all of Alchemist's backstory has now been revealed, if you've been keeping your eyes open and your mind peeled. I'll be filling in the details in other fics and conversations now, but I'm not sure how direct I can be about it on the boards. The big secret is directly related to one of those 'this must not become publicly known' secrets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiGeist Posted June 3, 2005 Share Posted June 3, 2005 Yerp.Couple of things, just how involved in this now is the WCK, and how borked are we?Just wondering how this is going to influence the WCK game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kestrel404 Posted June 3, 2005 Author Share Posted June 3, 2005 I'm not sure. Depends, really.I've got just one more scene to write. At the end of it, Alchemist is going to owe several large favors to the Teragen, he's already gotten an extra enemy flaw out of this (he had enemy - proteus, now Chiraben's got a grudge against him specifically), and there's going to be a nice juicy hail of legal fall out surrounding the sudden disappearance of his wife and children (Alchemist isn't exactly going to be able to say he's stashed them in the Teragen's hands to keep them safe from Utopia...that's just silly after all).Alchemist himself is going to be rather surly, and will start wearing a hat. I've already mentioned the golden eyes. I'll get around to changing the avatar eventually.As for how it affects the knights directly, well, it shouldn't. Not immediately. But they might be used as pawns against him at some later point. That will need to be worked out in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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