Operation: Feedback

[Xeno]

Insofar as Xeno's exploits are written, this is where I shall come to speak of them OoC.

Two matters of immediate and general relevance come to mind:

First, in general it's probably safe to consider most Xeno-related material 'open', unless indicated otherwise. For example, if anyone would be in a position to both notice and care about its pre-grave-robbing operation, feel free to step in, within reason.

Second, I write largely to get better at writing (the necessity of this is likely apparent)... so please provide feedback. Harsh, ego-splintering criticism is fine, so long as its cause is made clear.

[Ashnod]

I enjoy the description of Xeno sensing the world very much.

I'm confused about where he is and how he got there, etc.