Kirby1024 Posted March 22, 2003 Share Posted March 22, 2003 This is a thread for discussing Fiction. I'll keep it mostly freeform, although I'll ask no flaming, and if you have criticisms about a Story, please keep them constructive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FLAGG Posted March 28, 2003 Share Posted March 28, 2003 Again I would like to give props to Meridian.I have really enjoyed your stories. You have managed to bring several elements into Agendas and Conflict. I think you have done a great job with each chapter that when I have read it I feel a connection with each character. When I have finished I feel as though they have really done something but you also manage to leave it a great Cliffhanger point that makes me sit and wait for the next to be written.Again ...Great Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted March 28, 2003 Share Posted March 28, 2003 Ditto Meridian. Very good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meridian Posted April 1, 2003 Share Posted April 1, 2003 Just wanted to say thanks to those folks who have liked my stories so far.Also wanted to say that "All Souls Night" has really got me curious. I'm wondering what is going to happen next there and the writing is very well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemmy Chillmeister Posted April 6, 2003 Share Posted April 6, 2003 Arek, nice story. I liked the second part more than the first. The first seemed more like a 'this is what's happened so far' while the second was a real story. So, thumbs up from this dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meridian Posted April 7, 2003 Share Posted April 7, 2003 I'm with Lemmy. The first part didn't do a lot for me but the second was very interesting. Like it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FLAGG Posted April 7, 2003 Share Posted April 7, 2003 Nice Job Arek!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 Well, "The Road Back" begins now. The first "Episode" was posted just a few seconds ago. Hope to hear the feedback shortly. Before I start off on part 2. Yes, there will be more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigmata Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 I thought cancer was cured? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandy Davis Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 that is a common mistake.Nott all cancers are the same.Yhere are cancers that can be cure,and other that can't, so I think that in Aberrant world they just cured the common cancers,and most of the rest.As it is there is a threory that if if you could set some type of cancers at a set rate youc oudl make someone who would live for ever.SO not only are they cured in diffrent ways they also do diffrent things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted April 20, 2003 Share Posted April 20, 2003 Cancer?You mean little Mayumi's Leukemia? It was a different type of case. I didn't describe it in detail, didn't think I really needed it to be. Yeah, I know novas have cured diseases and such, but I thought having some old disease pop up in a new form would be interesting. But, since there was good news, I'd bet a cure will be found for her type shortly by some brainy nova.I didn't know an outside thing like that would distract from the rest of the fiction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David 'Dr. Troll' Smith Posted May 2, 2003 Share Posted May 2, 2003 Quote:Sakurako Hino:Cancer?...I'd bet a cure will be found for her type shortly by some brainy nova.Actually, it depends. There are all sorts of diseases and genetic disorders that only affect a very small number of people. Bluntly, it might not be worth their time.Thus Cancer X, which affects millions of people, is cured. But Cancer Z, which affects only hundreds, is not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted May 3, 2003 Share Posted May 3, 2003 You seem to have explained it better than I could have ever tried. Thankies! ^.^ My only other problem with this fic is that I thought it was just... un-nova like. I mean... Too... Mundane. >.< Perhaps if I feel like getting back into things here, I might liven things up a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DigiGeist Posted June 27, 2003 Share Posted June 27, 2003 Well, I did my first story under the DigiGeist label.I combined his eruption with a story. I sort of like flashbacks.Anyways, fellas, let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted July 17, 2003 Share Posted July 17, 2003 I currently have 2 stories active, I ask for patience as I'm sorting through a heavy palette of things in life. I can get rhough in the very near short term. I wish to ask Ronin to wait untill I post to continue on our Fiction thread. I'll be posting the continuation of BOTH stories by this weekend I hope. I'm taking my time so I don't push to burn-out on anything. I'm just being careful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted July 19, 2003 Share Posted July 19, 2003 Okay, did my part for god and country, and nicely boxed up and wrapped one story. Thanks for riding along, Walker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walker Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Quote:Originally posted by Sakurako 'Endeavor' Hino:Okay, did my part for god and country, and nicely boxed up and wrapped one story. Thanks for riding along, Walker.No worries, excuse me while I just go back to beating my head with this large stone to try and dislodge the writer/roleplayers block. Everything I try and do lately just ends up sounding lame, pointless, repetative. In a remarkable display of self restraint I have been refraining from drivelling.THUD THUD ouch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 You think your writer's block is bad... Mine's got it's own zip-code. >.<;I know ronin, you're waiting for my response, I'm trying my hardest to get on task. I'll see if I get something off of yours this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronin Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 Actually, I've just hit a bit of a block myself. Unless you had something you wanted to put in specifically, I was going to field the next part.Either way..Seph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted July 31, 2003 Share Posted July 31, 2003 Yeah... I think I don't have a hook to hang my hat on yet. Go for it. I'll do the next post afterward. Promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sakurako Hino Posted August 9, 2003 Share Posted August 9, 2003 Confused...You wanted next post, right Ronin/Seph?Just curious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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